Comments on: How to Write a Sales Letter Part 1 http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/how-to-write-a-sales-letter-part-1.html Internet Marketing, product reviews, affiliate marketing, SEO Thu, 20 Nov 2008 16:15:45 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.0.5 by: alex http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/how-to-write-a-sales-letter-part-1.html#comment-4258 Wed, 27 Jun 2007 07:51:12 +0000 http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/how-to-write-a-sales-letter-part-1.html#comment-4258 Hey Guys, Good headlines both of you. Seems we have some talent lurking in the not so shadows. One problem. It's not 13,000 subscribers, it's exposures (1000 subscribers). Hey Guys,

Good headlines both of you. Seems we have some talent lurking in the not so shadows.

One problem. It’s not 13,000 subscribers, it’s exposures (1000 subscribers).

]]> by: Rian http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/how-to-write-a-sales-letter-part-1.html#comment-4257 Wed, 27 Jun 2007 07:47:42 +0000 http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/how-to-write-a-sales-letter-part-1.html#comment-4257 Alex, I'm gonna give it a go.... I was able to come up with something for the first and second headlines, but for the third, I drew blanks. 1)“Arkansas Marketing Mogul Unleashes His Secret List Building System, Guaranteed to Flood Your Opt’in Boxes With Red Hot Subscribers, Creating Cash Out of Thin Air Faster Than You Can Say “Federal Reserve.” 2)“Who Else Wants to Own A Massive List of 13,000 Hungry Subscribers, Frantically Frothing At The Mouth and Begging For More, While Practically Giving You Permission To Make Them Your Personal ATM Machine?” 3) Couldn't hack it.... Good work though Alex, I've always wanted to see how someone dissects a sales letter. Alex, I’m gonna give it a go….

I was able to come up with something for the first and second headlines, but for the third, I drew blanks.

1)“Arkansas Marketing Mogul Unleashes His Secret List Building System, Guaranteed to Flood Your Opt’in Boxes With Red Hot Subscribers, Creating Cash Out of Thin Air Faster Than You Can Say “Federal Reserve.”

2)“Who Else Wants to Own A Massive List of 13,000 Hungry Subscribers, Frantically Frothing At The Mouth and Begging For More, While Practically Giving You Permission To Make Them Your Personal ATM Machine?”

3) Couldn’t hack it….

Good work though Alex, I’ve always wanted to see how someone dissects a sales letter.

]]> by: Ray the Canuck http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/how-to-write-a-sales-letter-part-1.html#comment-4253 Wed, 27 Jun 2007 05:27:42 +0000 http://www.netfrontiermarketing.com/how-to-write-a-sales-letter-part-1.html#comment-4253 Even before reading Note 2, I was thinking to myself: "Forget headlines - these would make GREAT one-liner ads!" Well done, Alex. The only difference I would make, is that I like to leave things "open" in the headline. I don't WANT to tell the reader everything about it - I WANT to leave things open-ended, so they MUST read the body of my ad copy, in order to learn "The Answer". So my three would be: 1) Arkansas Nobody becomes Overnight Tycoon, using a Secret List-Building System. Now, he's OPENED THE DOOR... For YOU!!! 2) THE RUSH IS ON... to Grab Access to 13,000 Double-Optin Prospects!! MOVE QUICKLY... and YOU can join in The Cash Windfall...!! (Assuming the number of subscribers to this service, will be limited to say, 250...) 3) 250 Smart Marketers are going to Gain Access to a SECRET List of 13,000 Offer-Hungry Buyers! Want to be One Of Them??? Even before reading Note 2, I was thinking to myself: “Forget headlines - these would make GREAT one-liner ads!”

Well done, Alex.

The only difference I would make, is that I like to leave things “open” in the headline. I don’t WANT to tell the reader everything about it - I WANT to leave things open-ended, so they MUST read the body of my ad copy, in order to learn “The Answer”.

So my three would be:

1) Arkansas Nobody becomes Overnight Tycoon, using a Secret List-Building System. Now, he’s OPENED THE DOOR… For YOU!!!

2) THE RUSH IS ON… to Grab Access to 13,000 Double-Optin Prospects!! MOVE QUICKLY… and YOU can join in The Cash Windfall…!!

(Assuming the number of subscribers to this service, will be limited to say, 250…)
3) 250 Smart Marketers are going to Gain Access to a SECRET List of 13,000 Offer-Hungry Buyers! Want to be One Of Them???

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